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personal ideas and thoughts

whilst taking these shots we were confident about it. each one of us showed their reviews and told us how we could improve on it more. it was a shame that it was in daylight because its supposed to be dark and mystery like. however, this was the only time where we all could get together. luckily, we are able to change the background colour a little darker so that the atmosphere would look dark. 

also, whilst editing these scenes, we felt that we should have taken more in different angles.

i felt that we could have improved on it more for example, there should have been more blood on the shirt and on the knife. furthermore, the scene where Zainab and Neeri is talking, we should have had some close up shots of them in different angles. 

apart from a few points to improve, I think the group has done a great job and hope that it would be a good opening sequence that the audience would enjoy. 

my inspiration on the opening sequence

I was inspired by Ring and Orphan movie.
The Ring, because of the asian stlye ghost. at the end i want to include a ghost so that it would create a more horrific effect to the audiences.
I was then inspired by the Orphan because at the end there is a huge impact because we find out that she is much older than the age she is shown to be.

Fed the fish evaluation

we tried to include the deeper voice in the shots. the sound track of the deep voice was created in garage band. however, we found it difficult to include it. our video would have been better if we had more shots. as it was our first time taking this, we didn't think about the fact that there should have been more shots even though we werent going to use it. 

it was supposed to show the girl working for a mystery person. the shed is where they share information. it was interesting when taking these shots because whilst taking them, we decided to do other shots and had a better idea.

Fed the fish

storyboard

we made a few changes to the storyboard whilst shooting as some angles didnt seem to work out to what we expected.
for example, we deleted a few parts from the storyboard and made new shots as we went along.

fed the fish storyboard

storyboard for classwork

soundtrack for classwork.